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sweet18-2004
01.06.05 at 11:34 a.m.


This is my life:
(sweet18-2004)

Content: (26/30)
Started here and ended here. Okay, the username is totally self-explanitory, and while it's not something that I would click on in a list of names, it fits your life. Well enough for me. Your entries are good, when they're nice and long and detailed. Every once in a while, you'll have an ambiguous entry that is usually far more emotional, but far more difficult to understand as a reviewer. I found that when you balanced emotions and details in the entry, they were interesting enough to merit my reading. I suppose though, as you like reviews, you'd also like some suggestions? Um, I guess what I would say is that for writing, and requesting reviews, being emotional without totally confusing the reviewers is highly important. I liked how your writing had a really strong voice, also.

Design: (24/30)
This is a cute design. I don't see quite how the title fits it ("this is my life") but the pictures/symbols are all really pretty and the colors look great. As to how well it matches your writing...well...I suppose it matches? I didn't really get the impression that you are a girly-girl or particularily oriental, so the colors and theme don't quite match. I dunno. It is a nice design, but I just can't connect it.

Update: (7/10)
Every 2 or three days. Good good.

Navigation: (5/5)
Easy enough for me.

Errors: (5/5)
Nadda.

Contact: (3/5)
Email, Notes.

Bonus: (12/15)
About, Pics, Old diary, reviews.

Total: (82/100)

Further Comments:
Song of the review: I just don't think I'll ever get over you -- Colin Hay

Favorite Quote:
Didn't find one.

Reviewed by: Valerie

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