sweet-slayer
Content: This made me raise my eyebrows in an O......k manner. I really don't like the prolonging of letters to emphasize words or direct address in diaries; it's a diary, not a public service announcement. This is just pointless; what's the use in stating the fact that you have something to say if you're not even going to say it? Why not just write an entry later saying whatever it is you have to say? I can relate to the last part of this entry. You're really impersonal in your diary, it's like you're afraid that someone will read something "private" and judge you, which, most likely is the case. I mean, why have a diary when all you're going to write about is school? {17/30}
Design: I'm not a Buffy fan, but I'll put that aside and critique this layout aesthetically. The picture is pleasing to the eyes; I love the way the four Buffies are all blended in together, yet, somehow, stand out on their own. I really like the small border around the picture and the organization isn't too bad. The scroll bar really doesn't match, though; the shade of grey is too light. Credit to Diva Designs. {24/30}
Update: You update pretty regularly, skipping a few days here and there. {9/10}
Navigation: All of your links are organized to either side of the entry box, but the Playlist seems out of place. {4/5}
Errors: The wtbloody2727 and imurqt links don't work. Your grammar is really strange in some places, also. {4/5}
Contact: E-mail, notes, AIM, guestbook. {5/5}
Bonus: Let's put it this way: you had a lot of links to check for errors! {15/15}
Total: 78/100
Favorite Quote: "Then M slept over last night and we pigged out on the Halloween stash...oy vey. "Fatty goodness", as Xander would say(Buffy, people, come on)."
Comments: The main flaw in your diary is the complete lack of emotion; just write more about things that really matter to you and you'll have a good diary.
Reviewed by Yelena.