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thatsmylife02
07.26.05 at 9:41 p.m.


on the way to the grey...:
(thatsmylife02.diary-x)

Content: (26/30)
When you get impassioned about something, you take off like a bat outta hell (scusing the language) and I'm deeply impressed. You really emote well when you seem to forget that you're actually writing and just let the words flow. I totally agree that we should have a way to save all of our thoughts to word docs, can you imagine how exciting some people's entries would be? I suppose I simply have to say that your diary doesn't... scream out at me to be read. It's not murder to read, but I'm not drawn into it like I am to some stranger's sites. I think that you appreciate what you write, and I ALWAYS say that is most important. You're logical and put the right quality and quantity into your writing, and that's pretty darn good. Keep it up.

Design: (22/30)
I can't figure out why your design is so dark! You seem to be a relatively happy person, and this desing just screams emo at me. The greys and blacks are something that I personally reserve and associate withsome who has trouble expressing emotions, and I find that you have no problems with that. I'm not sure this design matches you very well. It's a very efficient design though, so points/kudos for that.

Update: (7/10)
Well enough. I dunno. Your entries stand on their own, so the date consistency isn't as important.

Navigation: (5/5)
Works well for me.

Errors: (5/5)
Nadda. Bien, bien.

Contact: (5/5)
Comments, AIM, Email.

Bonus: (12/15)
Bio, Links, Wishlist, Counter.

Total: (82/100)

Further Comments:
You were the one who turned me on to Cool Hand Luke! I couldn't remember who that was.

Quote:
So when I sit down at night, in the privacy of darkness, I cannot grasp the thought I had earlier.
This happens to me all the time.

Reviewed by: Valerie

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