(thisisme-nea)
Content: (23/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Um, yeah. No. I mean, you write very well, and I enjoyed reading your site well enough, but you have so much slang that I just give up sometimes. You hit certain points that are great for talking about you and then you leave them hanging like threads in every entry. You talk all about your day and what makes you mad, but very little about what makes you happy. I dare say that what makes you happy should be the majority of what you say. Yes people listen, but people stop listening after you complain a lot (I've learned that one from life experience), and that seems to be the majority of what you say. I don't know. Maybe talk about yourself and who you are a little more. Like what you feel and think, beyond your anger and the people you're pissed at. That will strengthen your writing a lot.
Design: (27/30)
Very cute! I can't remember if you've had this template for a while, as you've been on my pending list for quite a while, but I like this design. I don't so much like the tagboard, but that's just me. I do like how the entry isn't outlined. It seems like naturally, it would be, but I like that it's not. I think that outlining the image in yellow would look great, shrinking the text outside of the tagboard would clean it up, and taking out the paragraph lines and adding breaks to your "last five entries" would be all that I would do.
Update: (8/10)
About as often as I do--nice :)
Navigation: (5/5)
Nice and clean.
Errors: (4/5)
The extras link on the older.html page and the cast link on the index.html page.
Contact: (5/5)
Book, notes, Email, AIM.
Bonus: (10/15)
Cast, tagboard.
Total: (82/100)
Further Comments:
I was suprised to look at your cost of war link. I didn't realize that was how much it was. I wonder though if this is a political spot for you, or just a matter of stating the fact.
Favorite Quote:
"I told her I wanted a bracelet so I could walk around Roland Park Country School like the little white girls flaunting there expensive Tiffany necklaces and bracelets."
Reviewed by: Valerie, song of the review: anchor by cave in