(tickingdreams)
Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I must be in a great reviewing mood lately, because I'm really impressed by your writing too (in reference to my last review, which I loved also). You're an amazing writer for being a mere 15 (nearly sweet 16) years old. Your style is clean and your voice is crisp. I don't know if you have an English accent, but I could defiantely imagine you with one. You're trained in proper english, and it makes reading your website a true pleasure. You generally write about less interesting things than you could (ie. GCSE thingamabobs aren't super thrilling), but every once in a while you touch upon what makes you unique, how you feel about yourself, and who you really are. These are the kinds of entries that really make a review: any reviewer wants to walk away feeling like any one entry is a little encapsulation of the person. Aim for these kinds of entries more often. I'll keep reading over the next few months to see how you do. Excellent job!
Design: (29/30)
I like your design a lot. It's made for you, it represents you in several ways (your ethnicity, your personality), and I generally think it's really functional and well laid out. Nice job.
Update: (7/10)
Numerically, you're pretty poor about updating (five times a month), but sometimes I feel like that's about how often I actually say something valuable on my own site. So we're square.
Navigation: (5/5)
Very well done and easy to use.
Errors: (5/5)
None.
Contact: (5/5)
Email, AIM, MSN, Comments.
Bonus: (15/15)
About, Colophon, Hates, Favourites, Reads, Forums.
Total: (94/100)
Further Comments:
Does IRL (from this entry mean I Really Loathe?
Favorite Quote:
Nadda.
Reviewed by: Valerie