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Content: (15 / 30)
Ok, I started on October 26, because I saw the words “government cheese” and thought that would be a good place to start. Um, a rant about crazy black people. Ok, I guess MAYBE I can relate to some of it, but honestly. LET’S MAKE SOME MORE FREAKING GENERALIZATIONS! Are you a Nazi or something? No… wait… KKK? Seriously, drop the racism, it’s not cool. However, the rest of your bus rant thoroughly entertained me. I love public transportation. Oh em gee this is some entertaining stuff… not. The first entries I read were, to be perfectly honest, completely entertaining and I thought you’d be an awesomely satirical writer or something. Turns out I’m wrong. You can only be cool once a month or so. Your novel… wow. Um, what the hell? Gee, look, now I stumble upon some quizzes. Please spare me. Though, right after that, I find a link to an article on fascism that was quite entertaining. Ok… well, after reading that, I’m officially bored. There’s a couple entries in which you are quite entertaining and can easily hold my attention, but the rest are boring day logs and descriptions. If you’re going to put other people through reading your diary, at least offer something substantial. I’m not saying your thoughts aren’t important because God forbid I intrude on your free speech rights, but really, don’t make me read this if it’s boring. You write huge entries that literally consist of no intelligent thought.
Design: (23 / 30)
Your template makes me happy. Not many templates make me happy. Granted, I don’t like the colors, but that’s not a problem because they complement each other. Your design makes me laugh. Though, chatterboxes and such are THE most annoying things to find on someone’s main page. You really need to find somewhere else for that unsightly chunk of stupid. Also, the “Who am I?” sections on diaries are getting old. If you want people to know these extra little tidbits, make an extra page or something but it just adds unnecessary bulk to your template. You have SOOOO many damn links and buttons and all other little things I could think one could put in that bar. It looks bad, to be honest. Move them to a links page or a buttons page and rid yourself of the massively long list. Other than the really horrible looking mile-long link section, I love your template to death. Credit to David Schwartz. Oh, and your font is really small, it gave me a headache. Maybe one size bigger would be better.
Update: (10 / 10)
You write sporadically, maybe once everyday or sometimes everyday. It’s all in order and you have good consistency. Nothing much to say here.
Navigation: (1 / 5)
OK, I don’t know how much more I can express my loathing of your navigation system. I don’t really see any sort of organization. I mean, if you’re going to have so many on your main page at least have them in alphabetical order or something.
Errors: (5 / 5)
I am definitely not going to click every link because if I did that it might take me a year or so. So, I’ll click on a couple of them. Um sure, they’re working.
Contact: (1 / 5)
Um, I see a chatterbox. I’m not even going to go into how much I hate those. I don’t see any other form of contacting you. If you can prove me wrong I guess I’ll give you some points back, but right now, I don’t see that happening.
Bonus: (15 / 15)
Ok, no need to list everything because you have about 326 things on there. (That was an estimation.) I have no choice but to give you full points here.
Further Comments: Well, not much. I love the idea of your template, I hate your navigation and all your writing is mediocre. I’m sorry for being so blunt, but at the same time, I’m not sorry in the least bit because you needed to hear it.
Final Score: (70 / 100) A fitting score if I do say so myself.
Reviewed by Charlotte