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Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Some of your entries were fantabulous. They were well written stories and thoughtful. Some of the others though, I eiether couldn't understand or were too vague to make any sense to me. The first type were things where you would be telling a story, and it would be very emotional, but to an outside source (aka reviewer), the topic of the writing was very difficult to understand. These entries need more details! The second type of entry that I didn't like so much were the ones that were very vague. They would obviously be thoughtful, but they were so vague, they weren't even telling a story to follow. More details please! My overall suggestion is, you guessed it, details, details, details! You've got the bases of emotionality and thoughtfulness in your writing, but those can only do so much for a reviewer that can't figure out what you're talking about.
Design: (27/30)
This is a nice design, and it fits your writing very well. The idea of it is simple, the whole design flows together, and the way it fits your writing is plain to see: you have a very emotional style of writing, and the design is an emotional base. Good choice.
Update: (7/10)
Every few days, but not often in the past few days.
Navigation: (2/5)
Not so easy, as getting the right link is hard, and knowing which link is which is difficult too.
Errors: (5/5)
Nadda.
Contact: (4/5)
Notes, Email, MSN.
Bonus: (0/15)
Uh...none?
Total: (70/100)
Further Comments:
your = belonging to you, you're = you are. Very simple. Also: know = to comprehend, now = in the present moment.
Favorite Quote:
Never found one.
Reviewed by: Valerie