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Content: I've got to say, a lot of the things you said made me raise my left eyebrow and just think, "What the..." Hm, I agree with some of your opinions, but, when it comes to others, your hypocrisy is overwhelming. Oh, no, don't worry, I won't take points off for that or anything. After all, they're your opinions, right? Even if half of the things you say do make me want to punch you, you aren't afraid to express your feelings. You associate normal day-to-day stuff with your beliefs and tie it all in together. The only thing that really bothers me is the cursing. Usually, I don't mind, but using the word "fuck" on a daily basis in your writing makes you sound like one of the "uneducated asses". No scratch that, that's not the only thing. I don't know how many times I've said this in past reviews, but it really doesn't make sense to directly talk to your readers in your diary. It's a diary, not a public service announcement. Another thing I've noticed after paying close attention is that, on top of this direct address, you tend to shove your opinions down your readers' throats and attempt to change their thoughts to resemble yours. I don't know if this is on purpose or if it's just how it comes off, but you should try to watch that. {21/30}
Design: If I could, I'd look like that mannequin. Hm, it's a very nice concept, but the execution could've been a lot better. The picture is in the upper left corner, which is fine, but there's all this useless white space all around. It would look a lot better if you made the background color match the picture; maybe a nice shade of gray. I usually like things to be a little off-balance, but it just looks bad when it comes to this specific layout. The entry and navigation boxes are longer than the picture and it doesn't flow too well. {20/30}
Update: You update regularly. {10/10}
Navigation: The links are in their own nifty box to the right of the entry. Heh, I like the bold effect; nice touch. {5/5}
Errors: Grammar, "Blow Your Mind" (reviews) and "Mariea" (cast) links don't work. {4/5}
Contact: E-mail, notes, guestbook. {5/5}
Bonus: Vampire, cast, pictures, joined, reviews, dive-reviews, visitor counter. {15/15}
Total: 80/100
Favorite Quote: "Whoo hoo. Cheap decorations, cookies, and a school gymnasium. Oh, the possibilities!"
Comments: No, I think I've pretty much said it all.
Reviewed by Yelena.