Content -- I read this whole diary from entry one, and it was very interesting. A lot of the entries were "Today I did this" and "Today I feel [emotion]". Those kind of entries are okay and all, but diaries should also help the reader get to know the diartist better. I really like diaries that I can relate to, and I didn't feel that with this one. However, it was very well written, with the exception fo a few missed words in sentences and some punctuation errors (" instead of ', missed apostrophies). I admire your faith, and I hope that you continue to let Him guide your life. [20|30]
Design -- Purty sandy beach background with a beautiful picture of dolphins swimming. Very relaxing and calming, and it compliments the tone of the diary well. It's not dark at all, and kind of uplifting. Nicely done! The only problem I had was the fact that your older page is archived kinda funky. That can be easily fixed though. [28|30]
Updates -- Only 4 days missed in November, but there are multiple entires on some days. [9|10]
Navigation -- Easy as pie! [5|5]
Errors -- Just the pesky ones I mentioned above, but I'm not taking off more points. [5|5]
Contact -- Email, AIM, guestbook, notes. [5|5]
Bonus -- Rings page, Quizzes page, "Meet Me" page, Imood. [9|15]
Total -- [81|100]
This diary reviewed by: CHALANDREA
Favorite Entries: This entry reminds me alot of me, and almost every girl I know, and this entry reminds me of conversations that I've had with my friends. Don't feel bad hun, I got the same score on a test like that!